Saturday 15 February 2014

Audience Feedback

 3 Positive Comments:












I am extremely happy with these comments, it's supportive to know that people enjoy the product that I have created. It is also great to know that the video has been successful even though it challenged so many genre conventions. I am glad that audiences appreciate the product and I am happy that not only does the video appeal to indie audiences, but appeals to a variety of audiences.


3 Constructive Comments:


Amy Palmer 19:  I love it, what happens next!! I want to see more of the artist, didn't really get why she was in the forest tbh.



II    Perhaps some audience members may not understand why certain locations were chosen, however I wouldn't change this because when planning my music video I felt that a deserted forest would represent the artist's state of mind, plus it is a naturalistic setting which relates to the indie genre. 

David Watson 40: Why does there have to be smoking? Bit of a bad influence on kids that might be watching this.

Although our use of iconography may be controversial, it is the whole purpose of the narrative. I wanted to show throughout the music video the effect that drugs, alcohol and relationships can have on an individual - this narrative could not have been clear with the use of specific iconography. The themes involved in my music video perhaps may not appeal to an older audience, however these themes could appeal and possibly relate to our target audience.

Paul Marks 28: This is great, seems professional yet if I'm being picky at times the camera appears a bit shakey? Don't know if you wanna sort that out or not.

Paul's comment is a valid one, and I agree that stabilisation definitely makes a music video look more professional, however this is not the style I was going for. I wanted to portray an unstable relationship therefore I felt that unstable camera movement would help portray this. As much as I agree with Paul's comment, I wouldn't alter the stabilisation within my music video as it contributes to the narrative.



Overall I am extremely happy with the feedback as it seems that audiences are enjoying my product. As a media producer this kind of feedback makes the hard work feel worthwhile. I appreciate the positive and the negative comments since everybody is untitled to their own opinion, and as much as I agree with the constructive comments, I wouldn't want to change my product as I am very happy with it's outcome. I think there is an evident improvement from the rough cut to the final product.

Friday 14 February 2014

Evaluation (Part 4)

Evaluation (Part 3)


Evaluation (Part 2)

Evaluation (Part 1)

For our A2 media project our task was to create a music video that would appeal to a
particular target audience. I worked on this alongside my group members: Drew Wyllie,
Jenna Van Bergen and Rhianna Maclaey. My role within the group was mainly on the
practical side - I did a lot of work contributing to the story boarding and editing process.I
was also the artist that was being promoted within the video, therefore I contributed to the
representation of the artist. I think our group worked very well together as we had a great
blend of characters and qualities. Some members were strong researchers, some were
creative and some had a greater knowledge regarding the technologies that we were using
- therefore as a group it think our individual strengths helped and benefitted each other.

The brief was to create a music video to a song of my choice. Music videos are visual creations that are made to promote a song. Music videos generally follow the conventions of the music genre that is being promoted in order to appeal to the appropriate target audience. However, music videos sometimes break the stereotypical conventions in order to appear unique or attract a wider audience. Not only do music videos promote a song, but they also promote the artist. Music videos provide
the audience with a clearer understanding of the artist's personality and style, therefore
allowing the audience to build a relationship with the artist and their music. There are three types of music video:



Performance: a performance based music video is a way to show off the artist's performing skills, whether that be through singing or dancing. For example - Beyonce's 'Single Ladies' music video is a performance based video as it purely shows her singing and dancing, informing audiences that she is a very talented performer.




Narrative: a narrative based music video is one that tells a story. Usually these videos involve a large variety of locations and iconography with a more movie-like feel to it. Some artists prefer music videos like this as they like to promote their music rather than themselves. For example Ed Sheeran's 'Give Me Love' is a narrative based music video as it doesn't involve Sheeran performing. It tells the story of a lonely girl who takes on a 'cupid' role of making others fall in love. Michael Jackson's 'Thriller' is a good example of a music video that has such a dominant narrative that it gives off a movie feel. However this music video also involves a strong element of performance with Jackson singing and dancing.

Concept: a concept based music video is one that sells a theme, moral of ideology to the audience. However, a concept is usually displayed in a narrative or performance based video. And of course a music video can be a mix of all styles of music video. For example the music video to Christina Aguilera's 'Beautiful' follows a blend of all three styles above: with a performance segment of Aguilera singing, a narrative of people being ashamed of who and what they are, but a concept of that everybody is beautiful.

Picture: Christina Aguilera performing the song.


Picture: Two homosexual men displaying the concept of the video
– not being ashamed or embarrassed of yourself.



Picture: A girl smiling to explain the narrative of the video 
– over coming self doubt and embracing who you are.


My chosen music is indie/alternative pop. I chose this music genre because I wanted to go for something less predictable so that I could make my video look more authentic, therefore my group and I chose this genre as it is less mainstream. I wanted an upbeat song that doesn't follow the very popular dance genre, a song that still maintains an acoustic feel, therefore "The Apple Tree" by Nina Nesbitt. The typical codes and conventions of an indie music video would be to display the artist's musical talents through performance based scenes, and to portray a sense of normality so that the artist is represented as a singer/songwriter rather than an image or a product. It is also conventional in an indie music video to display a narrative in order to emphasise that meaning of the song. Indie artists also tend to portray a slight quirkiness within their music video or their representation in order to appear unique and individual and therefore break away from the mainstream.

Indie characteristics are demonstrated within Nina Nesbitt's music videos. Besides the simultaneously quirky yet ordinary feel to her "Stay Out" music video, Nina is also displayed playing a guitar whilst singing. This piece of iconography is expected in an indie music video as it promotes the music and the talent of the artist, rather than selling the artist as a product. Along with the performance segments, there is also a clear narrative to the music video, which is displaying a group of friends staying out and having fun together. Nina is represented as a very ordinary girl in this music video. She is presented in very casual clothing, such as a leather jacket and jeans, surrounded by ordinary friends. Her normality is relatable to the target audience (15-25 year olds) and follows people to admire her and aspire to be like her. This relationship that is built with the artist is what sells the song and the creativity of the music video, which is therefore conventional to the indie genre. This understanding of the conventions assisted me with planning the music video as it made me realise that I wanted to break away from Nina Nesbitt's characteristics to make the video my own, yet still maintain elements of indie within our music video. This would then hopefully attract more audiences and be relatable to them.

When planning the music video I decided that I wanted to consider some of the codes and conventions of the indie genre, but also challenge them. Rather than following the upbeat feel to Nina Nesbitt's song "The Apple Tree", my group and I decided that we were going to give out music video a darker storyline with an edgy style. We decided to follow a 'grunge' styles when deciding what to wear. My outfit's and hairstyles were inspired by Rihanna's look in the "We Found Love" love music video. This challenges the stereotypical indie 'look' and is most probably more conventional to the rock genre, however this style works with our narrative. Usually indie music videos use very simple and natural editing styles in order to give a naturalistic feel, however I used many effects and a fast-pace editing style to challenge to challenge the conventions of indie and because again it worked well with the song and our narrative. The concept displays how the influence of relationships, drugs and alcohol can effect individuals. My group and I felt that this narrative worked well with the lyrics of the song and therefore was conventional to the indie genre in the sense that the meaning of the song was being promoted. An indie convention that I did follow was a performance section (with the artist singing and playing guitar) in order to promote the artist as a singer/songwriter rather than an image. The performance sections are evident mainly in the beginning of the video and occasionally throughout. These sections were filmed in a deserted forest - a naturalistic setting that relates to the indie genre. I also felt that the isolation in the forest represents the loneliness of the artist. This appeals to an indie audience as it represents the artist as a genuine musician rather than an image.